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Need help with English grammar :D

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Before You Uninstall This

How about sending me an email to notify me of its insufficiencies

or submit opinions about it?"

I discovered this writing is unnatural.

Could I reduce usage of "me" to once?

How about sending an email to notify its insufficiencies

or submit opinions about it to me?

Or

How about sending me an email to notify its insufficiencies

or submit opinions about it?

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#2 ·  Posted (edited)

this topic is not specific to here, though

that's right !!

my version of your paragraph is:

UnInstallation Notice!

Would you like to send us feedback about suggested features, insufficiencies, or notes, Thank you.

how about that !

Edited by star2

[quote]Baby you're all that I want, When you're lyin' here in my armsI'm findin' it hard to believe, We're in heavenAnd love is all that I need , And I found it there in your heartIt isn't too hard to see, We're in heaven .Bryan Adams[/quote].............................................................................[u]AUTOIT[/u]

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(thumbs up)

Cheers!

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